Wednesday 26 November 2014

Charlie and the Chocolate factory by Freya

Freya has been reading Charlie and the Chocolate factory and she has written a description of the story at home!
Once there was a boy called Charlie, his family were very poor.Charlie wanted to find a golden ticket so he could go to the chocolate factory. Four people had already found the golden tickets. His family thought there were no tickets but there was more tickets. Charlie kept getting wonka bars. Then he found a golden ticket, all the people were laughing and cheering... The next day he went with Grandpa Joe to the chocolate factory. He was going in and they had to sign something. Then they went into a small room. Next they went into the chocolate room. They went into the great glass elevator...

1 comment:

  1. Wow Freya, you've been really busy at home. This will be really helpful if someone is thinking of reading Charlie and the Chocolate Factory. I love the part where Charlie peels back the wrapper and sees a hint of the golden ticket shining back at him.
    Thank you for writing this in your own time.
    Mrs Prior

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